aquaorbis ([info]aquaorbis) wrote,
@ 2006-08-24 02:08:00
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Current mood: rushed
Entry tags:hagaren country, it is time

All Summer
Okay. I've finished chapter two of It is Time. And when I update, I'm going to rename the title to From Time to Time. Ah, that's so much better, isn't it?

This chapter is 26 pages long. o.O It looks like although I expect the series to be on the shorter side chapter-wise, the chapters themselves might come out a little long. That's because I plan the chapters to be very episodic. That is, each chapter is intended to be a single "episode". Within each chapter, a leap will be started and completed.

hehe yes... I've given this way too much thought for a "just-for-fun" piece.

I think the opening to the chapter is excellent and very funny. Also, it hints at some things that I have planned for later chapters. I'm worried about what I've done with Eriol's character, though. He's just not very... Eriol. But hopefully I can change that in subsequent chapters. I never was one for character introduction.

Anyway, as soon as I can get this proofread, I'll get it out there. I'm so glad to have finally completed something. Even if it did take me all summer...

Now the only thing to work on is chapter two of Hagaren Country. It's certainly coming along. I hit major writer's block around getting the two groups to meet, but after that it started flowing better. I can't promised an exact date of completetion (school starts on Monday), but an update should be on the way soon.

Here's to hoping, anyway.




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[info]belle_truth
2006-08-26 03:15 am UTC (link)
Looking forward to it, and liking the title :)

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[info]watercircle
2006-08-26 05:39 am UTC (link)
Yeah. Isn't that such a great title?? I am so proud of myself!

Would you mind beta reading? I know it's bad form to ask since I haven't even gotten around to proofing your stuff yet... >.<

And are you back from your trip yet?

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[info]belle_truth
2006-08-26 01:02 pm UTC (link)
I wouldn't mind at all! I'm not good with punctuation though u.u;
I'd be happy to help you in any way I can :)

We leave today. I'm in the hotel room kinda saying goodbye. I'm feeling ready to go home. I Disney, but it's just so stressful going on vacation and making sure you get to do everything you wanted to do in the allotted time. Plus walking and walking in the humid, nasty heat. My feat are ready for a break!

I got 2 Japanese books in Epcot :) One is called "Say it Right! In Japanese" lol. I was so excited looking at all the books trying to pick which would be best.

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